GANGS
OF NEW YORK
Gangs
of New York may be the most ambitious film of the
last few years. Its production design and cinematography
are among the best I have ever seen. Unfortunately
its story structure cannot support the film's ambition.
The
main structural element that sets this movie apart
from others is context. Most Hollywood fare shows
nothing of the world of the hero. It wants to get
to the goal as quickly as possible so the audience
can start on its wild ride.
As
a result, the average Hollywood movie has speed, but
no subtlety or complexity. There is no sense of how
the world drives the hero or how others manifest the
hero's central problem in different forms in the world.
Gangs
of New York, on the other hand, has a massive amount
of context. Indeed, it depicts and compresses all
of American history of the 19th century in one film.
And it does so by setting up a number of powerful
dramatic oppositions: nativists vs. immigrants, the
powerful vs. the weak, rich vs. poor, Catholic vs.
Protestant, tribes and sectionalism vs. government
and the rule of law.
But
there is one big problem with showing so much context.
You have to have a great desire line. Context is world;
it goes sideways in a story. Desire is linear; it
is the forward line on which everything hangs. The
more you put on the line, the stronger the line has
to be.
And
what is the desire line these writers use to hang
all of 19th century American history? A young man
wants to take revenge on the man who killed his father
in a street brawl when he was eight.
An
eight-year-old seeing his father killed in a street
brawl is not the stuff of Hamlet. This is no prince
whose throne has been usurped by a murdering uncle
who has also married the murdered king's wife. Which
is why this boyΉs burning desire to take revenge rings
so hollow. And why the forward movement of the story
collapses almost immediately.
A
weak desire line in a film with so much context is
already big trouble. Add to that an almost complete
lack of plot and we have narrative suicide.
The
interesting thing is why there is so little plot.
I found myself wondering about that while I was watching
the film (also a very bad sign). It didn't make sense.
Here was a fascinating period of American history,
with developments coming fast and furious, and yet
nothing seems to be happening in this film.
And
then it hit me. Gangs of New York has almost no reveals.
Plot doesn't come from a lot of things happening.
Plot comes from hidden information about the opponents.
When this information is revealed to the hero and
the audience, the story turns. The audience is surprised
and engaged.
So
why does Gangs of New York have almost no reveals?
It all goes back to the choice of a desire line. By
giving the hero all the knowledge with his revenge
desire line, it is the opponent, Butcher Bill, who
must discover hidden information about the hero. The
opponent has the reveal, and it is information the
audience already knows. This is a fatal mistake.
The
choice of a desire line also causes a break in the
movie's spine. The first movie ends after Bill learns
the hero's true identity and plot to kill him. In
the annual tribute to the heroΉs slain father, Bill
brands the hero in front of the entire community and
sends him into exile, which is just down the street.
Besides
being unbelievable - Bill the Butcher isn't a man
who shies away from killing his enemies this action
ends the first story and forces the movie to have
to restart. In a movie this long, that's a real audience
killer.
The
second movie represents a considerable drop off from
the first, which already suffered from a weak desire
line. Incredibly, for a movie this long, this second
film felt both rushed and boring, as the branded outcast
quickly rises to lead all Irish in New York. I guess
thereΉs nothing star power can't do.
Not
surprisingly, the writers have trouble coming up with
an organic ending. They have already given us a final
battle when Bill exposes the hero and brands him in
the tribute. Now they have to come up with another
battle, this time in the midst of the terrible race
riots of 1863.
But,
curiously, the writers purposely undercut the showdown
between hero and opponent by having the federal guns
blow up the opposing gangs before they can fight.
Thematically,
this is quite interesting; we are shifting from one
social stage to another, from the era of New York
ruled by gangs to an era of New York ruled by a nation
of laws.
But
the cost of this thematic choice is severe. It further
de-dramatizes a final confrontation that is too-long
in coming and is a pale repetition of the previous
story beat.
There
is much about Gangs of New York that is worthwhile,
even awe-inspiring. But the movie is also proof, once
again, that great filmmaking comes from a great script.
And the best visuals in the world won't save you if
your script isn't there.
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