SIGNS
Night Shyamalan
has been a wildly successful writer in Hollywood, and it's almost
all due to his ability with plot. Shyamalan is a master of the
reveal, and in the blockbuster world of mainstream movies, that
is the best talent to have.
Signs has
nowhere near the quality of The Sixth Sense. But it does show
some of the writer's techniques.
Plot comes
from hidden opposition. One reason the plot in Signs is not
as strong as the one in The Sixth Sense is that Shyamalan exposes
the opposition fairly early. Partly that is because Signs is
a horror film, a form that is based on the attack of the opponent.
When a relentlessly attacking opponent drives your plot, you
have a lot of problems hiding the opponent's power and setting
up reveals.
Shyamalan
tries to delay showing us the opponent as long as
possible by tracking a series of signs that a possible
opponent is attacking. But that gets old pretty fast.
To make
up for a genre that tends to kill plot (along with everything
else in the story), the writer sets up a number of traits and
facts about the characters that will pay off in the plot at
the end of the film. These traits and facts - like the son's
asthma and the brother's ability as a home run hitter - are
improbable enough that you can tell when you first see them
they are set ups. You know they will be paid off, you just don't
know how. Still, when they finally are paid off, it is pleasing
to the audience. And Shyamalan's greatest strength as a writer
is his ability to hold out as many plot payoffs as possible
until the end of the story.
The
other major technique that Shyamalan uses is connecting
supernatural stories with realistic psychological
weaknesses in his characters. This technique, pioneered
by Stephen King, is difficult to do well because it
is inherently ridiculous. Typically, a character that
has undergone severe trauma in his personal life must
then confront a number of sensational, otherworldly
events.
In Signs,
Shyamalan doesn't completely overcome the silliness of the technique.
His hero, after all, is an ex-minister who finds his faith by
defeating extra-terrestrials. True, I know a couple of ex-ministers
who had this experience, but it is rare.
Shyamalan's
main tool for taking the stink off is humor. By making fun of
a lot of the conventions of the genre - like wearing aluminum
foil caps so the aliens won't know what they're thinking - the
writer makes it ok to accept the fundamental premise that aliens
are attacking. He also alternates serious or scary moments with
funny ones, a difficult flip in tone that, when done successfully,
makes the characters seem more real.
What is
most important to understand about this technique is that you
can't be afraid to use it. Yes, it can seem stupid and contrived.
In Jurassic Park, it made no sense that the lead character hated
kids. Except that it gave him a character weakness he had to
overcome by working through the plot. Audiences don't just want
to see a plot played out, no matter how ingenious. They want
to see a character deal with a personal weakness and come out
better on the other side. Even a contrived character need is
better than none at all.
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