THE WEST WING
Aaron
Sorkin's story-telling is not about character or plot.
It's about running themes through dialogue. He crafts
his stories on a three- or four-part crosscut, which
allows him to touch on often arcane subjects of governance
without boring the audience stiff. But the stories
are really an excuse to lay down long tracks of dialogue
which inevitably build to an inspiring monologue on
the larger thematic issue.
This
kind of story-telling requires a talent in dialogue
and theme, which is an unusual combination for a writer.
And it is not a combination that the popular entertainment
industry normally values. Which makes the presence
and success of West Wing in mainstream American tv
especially pleasurable.
This
combination of dialogue and theme also highlights
both the strengths and weaknesses of this show. The
dialogue is often poetic and dense. So the language
of this president and his court is language fit for
a modern king. Poetic dialogue largely disappeared
after Huck Finn. Dialogue became vernacular, because
that was the talk of the common man. Placing his story
in the office of the President allows Sorkin to push
the dialogue back up the poetic scale.
But
there is a price, even in this rarified atmosphere.
This language often doesn't sound like real talk.
Everyone seems to be an expert in every area of modern
knowledge. Everyone speaks the same glib banter. And
we know we will have to sit through a monologue which
reminds us, yet again, how magnificent American democracy
is. The President, who usually delivers these inspiring
monologues, is the perfect father, strong but caring,
intelligent but full of love. Which makes the President
the most difficult to stomach of any character in
the show.
Sorkin
also has the annoying habit of spoiling the moment.
He'll write a nice piece of dialogue and then push
it into the fake or the sappy.
For
example, in one episode the President is addressing
some radio talk show hosts when he spots a Laura Schlessinger-like
woman sitting amongst the crowd. Sorkin gives the
President a brilliant monologue in which he shows
how foolish it is to take some of the commandments
in the Bible literally. Then Sorkin has the President,
while still staring at the chastised woman, tell one
of his aides,"That's how I beat him," referring to
a conservative he defeated in a past election. In
a second the President goes from enlightened teacher
to smug bully.
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